POETRY COMPETITION!.

[sadeboi]

Well thank you for admitting I am a good writer..by stating my work was plagiarized ..Dude...the thing about poetry is that you have to present your work in a language that is befitting of the story line or message..and that is what I did for the first part I posted...that does not mean my poetry is limited...it just means I want to get into character as if I a son and a somali mother are writing it...not me..

[zingii]

To All Of You.

Caku caruurtan wareersane
Cantarabaqashka badani.

Caku kan yiri gabya
Caqli yaraantiisa.

Caku kan camiraya ee
Calaacalaha isu garaacaya.

Caku inta la cajabtay
Gabay caruureedka.

Caaqil hadaan ahay
Caku idin iri markale.

[1nemansquad]

thanks for ruining a good thread

[Koronto60]

Yo, 1nemansquad! Sorry about shitting all over your thread, hommie.

I'll get one of the mods to clean up this mess.

[Koronto60]

Thanks, hyperactive.

[shaab_]

Poetry is gay

[DR-YALAXOOW]

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Dear white fella

Couple things you should know


When I born, I black
When I grow up, I black
When I go in sun, I black
When I cold, I black
When I scared, I black
When I sick, I black
And when I die, I still black.

You white fella,

When you born, you pink
When you grow up, you white
When you go in sun, you red
When you cold, you blue
When you scared, you yellow
When you sick, you green
And when you die, you grey. .!

And you have the cheek
to call me colored!

[sadeboi]

ll

[sadeboi]

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Dear white fella

Couple things you should know


When I born, I black
When I grow up, I black
When I go in sun, I black
When I cold, I black
When I scared, I black
When I sick, I black
And when I die, I still black.

You white fella,

When you born, you pink
When you grow up, you white
When you go in sun, you red
When you cold, you blue
When you scared, you yellow
When you sick, you green
And when you die, you grey. .!

And you have the cheek
to call me colored!

you're entertaining..

[Landhan]

Sure, my poems used to be big when i first registered.

[Voltage]

sadeboi,

That was actually good, man. Didn't figure you as the poetic type.

Good luck with the rest of it.

He is actually very good.

[Voltage]

Dr Yalaxoow, bravo bravo

[paidmonk]

I imagined Dr-Yalaxoow's voice during his poem, couldn't help myself sit straight.

Here is my Poem:


You are my tormentor and enslaver,
from the green fields of Cerigaabo
to the wheat fields of Gabiley,
You are as sweet as you are Bitter

You do not discriminate,
You do not care if my mother is Awal,
Jeclo, or Yunis; you cling to my teeth
as well as my wallet, oh sweet Khat

Begone from my life green one,
Come rain or shine you are there,
Only a volcano could make you disappear,
For today I am free, and my mind is Here.

[Voltage]

[LionHeart-112]

thanks for ruining a good thread

Sorry, bro...U know i'm against fruity things..