french speakers.. need some help quick!

[Naaima]

Salam alaikum


help me with my french translation work, only to check them, if they are grammar mistakes..i know there are grammar mistakes here and there! so please
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Fransk til imorgen: opgave 2

Yves Montand et sa famille quitte l’Italie, que Yves était 3 ans. La famille s’installe à Marseille. Yves Montand voudrai chanter. À Paris il rencontre Edith Piaf. C’est une très célèbre chantuese, que aide Yves Montand. il habite avec Simone Signoret en 35 an. Yves Montand est acteur aussi.

[DEMOLITION MAN]

Il n'ya pas de quoi , i can help you, but i feel guilty doing so cause this is your homework Darling!!

and trust me getting help is not the best thing, it always ruins your exam grades,

and I am speaking from experiance on that

[Naaima]

i know..butt axam axam!!

[DANGIRL]

The first part should be written like this.

(Yves Montand et sa famille sont partis Italie, quand la famille d'eu 3 ans)

[DEMOLITION MAN]

[quote="Naaima"]Salam alaikum


help me with my french translation work, only to check them, if they are grammar mistakes..i know there are grammar mistakes here and there! so please
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Fransk til imorgen: opgave 2

Yves Montand et sa famille quitte l’Italie, que Yves était 3 ans. La famille s’installe à Marseille. Yves Montand voudrai chanter. À Paris il rencontre Edith Piaf. C’est une très célèbre chantuese, que aide Yves Montand. il habite avec Simone Signoret en 35 an. Yves Montand est acteur aussi.[/quote]

Alright then

Mistakes

que= quand
que=qui

3rd mistake's answer is "Qui as" or ("A" only)

thats it

First mistake = (on First line )
2nd mistake = (second line)
3rd on 3rd line

[DEMOLITION MAN]

Dangirl

On parle Francais ??

[Naaima]

[quote="DANGIRL"]The first part should be written like this.

quand la famille d'eu 3 ans[/quote]


no this part have nothing to do with the family sis ..<<when Yves was 3 years old<< ..que Yves était 3 ans

[DANGIRL]

DM,I can speak French(kinda), but I would like to improve it though.

Naaima,

Then it should be "quand Yves avait 3 ans" drop the "que".

[Naaima]

dang et DM merci beaucoup!!

[DANGIRL]

[ À Paris il rencontre Edith Piaf]


Did you meant to say "Yves a rencontre Edith Piaf a Paris" ???

[Naaima]

it so difficult to translate from danish to another langauge..dagan yes! i can see my mistake now!..translated without thinking of french style!..thank you for taking the time to draw this out

[DANGIRL]

For me with French it that the the spelling does not make sense to me and the structures.